Marvel Evil

[SuFi B A M F513]

[fadedone]

i like this one but it seems over contrasted again...also try using c4d renders to add more to the background to add more depth..

[Skaryface]

TBH, its a mess. i cant tell whats going on. its over contrasted and sharpened.
text is half blurry, half pixely.

[Ebrithil]

I have to agree, that although this sounds harsh it is a mess, you need to cut down and make everything run smoothly.

There is no depth or flow apparent in the peice.
it took me about 10 minutes to figured out what it was tbh. :L
Start again and use c4d and such, and make sure you use them to flow with the render.

[Monroe]

it took me about 10 minutes to figured out what it was tbh. :L

It took you 10 minutes to see it was Carnage and Venom? Lol I think that's more the fault of your eyes than his design.

[SuFi B A M F513]

Thanks for the comments guys, I will most likey do a total re-work on this.

[Mountford]

I like it, not entirely sure what the blue thing is :/ but the left guy looks awesome.

You should try just using him (and his effects) on another C4D background!
Great work bud

[Monroe]

I see you were trying to add depth but imo the blur is too strong.

[SuFi B A M F513]

I agree man, I didnt realize that until it was too late. Thanks.

[Ebrithil]

It took you 10 minutes to see it was Carnage and Venom? Lol I think that's more the fault of your eyes than his design.

Marvel evil didn't give me much of a clue, it's too sharp and it looks like Carnage's face has been blurred out?

I know for a fact SuFi can do better.