Me You....

[Downfall]

CNC kinda used Forks style
and yeah kinda failed on text

[Slave]

lol nice little phrase there, but I don't think this is one of your greaters,

I feel the light source is off here an you need to darken the upper part if your ganna have such a bright lower, also i think you should clean her up a little she is kinda hidden thru all the fractals an c4d.

it's coming along kiu king ^^

[Derosion]

Lol, that's a dirty quote <3.
Suits the render.

As for this piece, yes, as Slave said, it isn't your best.
The effects and colors need work, they aren't all appealing and with stocks like these, you should try realistic effects for a better atmosphere.

Bokehs, lighting effects, etc.

[Downfall]

whats bokehs and thanks for the cnc joey and slave <3