My First Ever Attempt

[Bean]

After starting to follow a Tutorial, i kind of leaned off and started doing my own thing??
my first ever attempt so what you think??

[RemixIsWin]

Thats pretty good for a first attempt :O

Text defiantly needs work but other than that its not bad. Did you follow Rad's tut?

[Bean]

Yup.. Then got lost and just started pressing buttons..

[Andrew]

Not bad man, i can see you were using rad's tut
Only thing i say you should improve on for now is that you have too much dark space in there, give it a background, something to sit on you know? just so its not so plain :d

Keep it up though man. and the text i say stay away from it for awhile unless you need it because truth be told most beginners when they use text it doesn't help. save it for later on when you improve and know more about it

[bloodgod]

If thats really a first attempt it isnt bad at all. There's abit of a high contrast/saturation thing going on there. And that green looking spot at the top stands out. Also a tip on text, try using a color from your sig instead of plain white or black..keep'on rocking!!

[Bean]

changed some stuff since reading your comments...

any better??

[justasec]

much better, but your sig is too left side heavy, considering the render is symmetrical.

And i still dont like that thing in the top left above the render.

Good first attempt though

[Andrew]

Yea little better, still the contrast is a little stong but its better than the first

[Jmr100]

its a lil to dark

[Derosion]

just keep on reading some tutorials, you'll eventually get the hang of it and obtain your own style.

take different techniques from tuts, but don't completely copy.
keep it up, i hope to see more work from you ^^!