Your C4D blending/placement and text seems quite poor.
The placement covers too much of the render, therefore it's quite close to suffering from FHS.
It looks quite odd that there is the head and slightly the neck and two sabers on the side, meaning your focal needs to be brought out more.
Add some more effects to the lightsabers to create a stronger atmosphere and make this peace most aesthetically appealing.
With those changes made, this piece can be a lot better.
Keep it up!
I'm removing you from the SOTW since it's not allowed to post your sig for cnc before the voting has started.
7.No premade signatures are allowed. This includes tags that you have posted on the forums for critique are not allowed to be submitted until after the voting is set up.
Last edited by cc.RadillacVIII; 12-22-2010 at 04:29 AM.
wow i didnt remember but w.e. your so worried about that you didnt even cnc thanks a ton this site fuckin blows lol everyone does the same shit over and over and people only cnc thier friends its bullshit bunch of fuckin children
I'm not worried, I posted to inform you not to cnc on the sig.
With that attitud I'm not suprised you're not receiving some feedback. Cheer up! And if you're not satisfied with Joey's post I'm not sure what you're out for.
right to the cnc
i dont see how you can make an awsome sig like your 3rd one in your sig
then go downhill or are you trying to find new styles?
For me this is the worst sig ive seen from you
the lines across the focal are a total put off
The c4d placement is bad and the its too empty
You need to get some depth dude and make the focal a so called Focal
Only thing i like about this sig is the text.
Come on dude i expect more from you i know you can do alot better
right to the cnc
i dont see how you can make an awsome sig like your 3rd one in your sig
then go downhill or are you trying to find new styles?
For me this is the worst sig ive seen from you
the lines across the focal are a total put off
The c4d placement is bad and the its too empty
You need to get some depth dude and make the focal a so called Focal
Only thing i like about this sig is the text.
Come on dude i expect more from you i know you can do alot better
i do beleive his third sig was a gift from fork
imo
i don't like the text
and to me it looks like a floating head with two lightsabers by it
the blending isn't too bad but i think you need to try and add more of a
WOW factor to this
it has potential
p.s
calm down , there's no need for swearing because you didn't get any cnc.
Starkiller
Originally Posted by Tay X
