I don't think the colors are working too much in this case. I think the elements at the front aren't really helping with the depth of the sig. The elements in the BG are too soft for my liking to be honest as well (did you blur them?) If you are trying to achieve good depth, combine good lighting along with the composition and utilize the BG with the FG more. Using good colors that can contrast with each other helps alot too. I find there are too much colors in this sig and that the green messes it up. I think if you edit some parts of the C4D and align them better you can have a much better result.
Your color scheme is quite interesting though the dullness is a major throw off in this piece.
The blue that is consisting in the background doesn't seem vibrant enough to look good. Your overall yellow looks odd because your render doesn't compliment it. I would advise using a darker shade of maybe a red, blue or trying some coloring techniques to develop some stronger blending and a better atmosphere.
It all seems a bit too random, when it comes to effects. You've seem to grasped a decent concept and I am guessing that what is behind him is the sky, but I really don't think you executed that very well. The C4D looks rather odd and needs much more blending.
I would also like to see your contrast and how it variates it certain areas, more than others. This would also help with your lighting, pick an angle it's coming from, DON'T ADD A SOFT BRUSH, but use effects and different tools to create it and darken opposite areas of the direction of lighting.
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