Iron man - mio®

[cc.mio]

I have tried different style.. tell me what you think about it

[Gaaf]

i like it dude, altrough i think the text is a bit to sharp compared to the rest of the tag.
looks a bit like joey's style, not bad

[Mountford]

I agree, its sick dude, just the text lets it down abit :/
KIU :]

[cc.mio]

thank you.. v2 with edited text and added a little bit topaz, because of quality in v1 is not best

[Emsee]

add a bit more compo. the style needs some more practice imo

[Mountford]

Try it without text, and maybe a 1px boarder?
IMO that would make it looks sweeter
GJ dude kiu

[Derosion]

Work on your smudge, it seems distorted and messy.

I understand the style you were going for, but those rough smudge edges really don't look too appealing.
Effects + lighting could use some touching up too, but they're pretty tight atm ^^.

Text is a no, I would remove it or make it more appealing.