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    Default Dare devil start



    Im really not feeling it so far so ima work on it some more later CnC so far tho? I know coming off his left arm theres that yelowish greenish spot i gota fix

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    Great colors and flow. I think the right side is a little too busy and as a whole it feels a little one dimensional? Maybe do some c4d work and make the focal pop out a little more with some highlights or something? Good work though! Keep it up. 6/10



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    his face looks real lq, thats what makes me mad :-\

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    V2

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    v2 has lost a lot of your focal, than you might as well turn this to an abstract, which wouldn't be a bad idea actually :P

    What I would suggest here is to bring back some of your focal to the top an just lightly erase/layer mask some spots so it becomes more blended with your bg, this piece is less smudge an more soft play with the erase/layer mask.

    how so is the face lq ? was it too blured or over sharpened ? those are easy fixed if carried out in the begining.

    jsut do the opposite as to what it is if too sharp , blur and erase the rest of the body to just keep the face blurred, if it is to blured, go to ( once you have blured it) EDIT - fade blur, and than jsut lower it until you like what you see.

    EDIT: This effect can also be done if it needs to be sharpened btw :P

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    aha slave i love your long responses there great <3 lol mm yeah v2 i smudged n erased the heck out of it aha i see what you mean i did it wayy too much ^_^

    mm idk to the left of his teeth and the top right of his head seem lq to me in V1 but i can fix itt i sapose :-D

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    V3 Final (the best i think) opinons?


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    Very much better Excell, the text is spot on this time too imo,

    lol sry for the always wall of text, I make sure to list everything I think would help >.<

    In cany case, the only thing I could pick at now imo is that there is too much red :P

    Maybe out a burn to some of the edges to give it a little pop or maybe some yellow on the dude an put it on soft light or something :P

    KIU looking sweet ^^

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