Fight for Life

[Vyper316632]

v2


CNC please, my first one in a few days...

PS: Extra props to anyone who knows who this is (without looking at the file location...)

EDIT: V2

[Vash808]

isnt tht the guy from KillSwitch ,Jess Leach or sumtin...anywho....too bright and the " Fight for Life" phrase ; the font isnt all tht good....i suggest toning down the brightness other wise pretty nice ^^

[Vyper316632]

Yup, it's Jesse Leach

I always have problems with font. I can never get it to look right. Any suggestions are gladly welcome.

I will make a v2 with less brightness, but I'd like to get some more replies on this first.

[Genisphere]

yeah way too bright just stick to simple fonts till you get good at typo read up on some tutorials if you want to improve bottom arm looks cut off and wierd could be the lighting again i'd adjust that.

[Vyper316632]

I use clipping masks for the text most of the time.

The arm thing is definitely the lighting/fractal I used as I spent a decent amount of time cutting him out.

V2 tonight. At work right now...

[InSuRRGe]

Nice i love it good job

[Vyper316632]

update: v2

[Ascarine]

V1 is a little too bright like Insurrge's text =d

V2 however's actually pretty sick. Kinda want to see a little more effects in the right side the flows into the background of the stock cos its a little empty on the right atm. good job though ^^ can see a lot potential in this.