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    Default Stop

    Thanks for viewing, what do you think? This is my entry for the current LP comp.

    http://tehtatersalad.deviantart.com/art/Stop-192286671

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    the shadow of the mans head looks like a round head, not a tv?




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    Quote Originally Posted by DOMINOtm
    I know what you will have to do. This may sound a bit strange but it is the only logical option, you have to seduce your teacher

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    lol, right you are man, fixed it, thanks bro.

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    No problem dude

    All i can suggest now is trying to get the "peices" to bend together better :P

    But i'm no good at that so i can't help :/

    Edit- The sign post has it's light source coming from the left (see it?) but the shadow behind it means that the light source would be coming from straight ahead :P




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    Quote Originally Posted by DOMINOtm
    I know what you will have to do. This may sound a bit strange but it is the only logical option, you have to seduce your teacher

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    Sure do now, lol. I guess you stop noticing things like that after staring at it for so long, lol. Thanks for the advice again Ebrithil.

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    you cant enter this for the LP entry

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    whys that?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tay X View Post
    you cant enter this for the LP entry
    He can...

    Read the Rules: [Link]

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    they look really cut and pasted. there needs to be more shadow and make it look like there's a single light sorce. the other thing, the perspectives dont match up. from the angle the shot of the background is taken you should be looking at the top of someone's head, rather than straight on. the stop sign just kinda ends, there needs to be a little more of a definite "here is where the stop sign goes into the ground"

    if you moved the dude and the sign farther back the perspective wouldnt be an issue, and just for the sake of visual pleasing-ness i'd seperate the sign from the dude.

    i love the colors you're using and the grittyness of the stop sign fits really well with the look of the piece. i also love the background, idk if you just found it but it fits really well with the feeling of the picture. the sepia-ish adds to the image and makes it feel grungy but still clean cut. i like it a lot

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    Thanks for the crit panda. Great to hear I will put your suggestions to work

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