Black Ops Tag :)

[Mojoss]

Any thoughts on it?
Thanks

v2

[Genisphere]

not a fan of the border style try doing a 3px border they always look cleaner or no border at all but if your going to use a border do a 3px really hard to find your focal and your main render the flow is all over the place and not in one direction as well as the lighting the text is alright the smaller stuff is a little messy stick to simpler text and read some typo tutorials to get better at text i would remove that border blur the main render sharpen the focal and opac some of the background and other renders you may have use for blending ing so your focal can have a good visibility k.i.u.

[tzp]

Feels kinda messy to me, don't know what/where the focal is. We have some amazing tuts here, try some of those to really get your creative gears going! Keep it up! Glad to have you here!

[oNo]

Hard to actually see whats going on, took me a while to understand what it was.
The counter thing to the right looks to different to the rest of the tag and it practiacally
kills the flow of the tag, as genisphere said about the border. Its a really
Interesting style and the point is to keep trying new things till you get your own style.
good job KIU ♥