NightCrawler.

[Liquid]

CnC Please, i kinda like how this is turning out but i think it needs a little something more.

[sirenzo]

think look better if your focal was a bit larger bro i like the effects going on your doing here the bg needs some of the color u have in your focal and effects . kiu bro looking good

[Liquid]

Thanks, will keep that in mind, maybe a reddish background would help

[ketg]

i think it's not bad
the right side of the sig is very empty
and the text is quite distractingbut it's nice
i like the background choice , i think it works very well with the render
work more on your lighting, if you look at his face
you can see he has quite extreme lighting on both sides of his face
and a shadow in the middle , try to work around that ~
it's a nice and clean sig ~
keep up the work

[sirenzo]

yeah i saw that too ket was about to mention that but i guess forgotten too good eye m8 kiu liquid

[tzp]

I think it's great but needs a totally different backround for sure. Not much else I can say about it right now because I don't know what you would do with a different backgound, but this one just really doesn't fit IMO. Kiu!!

[TehTaterSalad]

work more on your lighting, if you look at his face
you can see he has quite extreme lighting on both sides of his face
and a shadow in the middle , try to work around that ~
it's a nice and clean sig ~
keep up the work

lol I was gonna write out a long explanation, but thats about it. In addition to ketg's post though, perhaps try changing the lighting on his face to match the lighting you created. Great job Liquid Love it.

[Liquid]

i see, i will change the background and work on lighting, Thanks for the cnc guys, working on v2