Jazz From Transformers

[crayzcreationz]

CNC Please.. Ill accept any comments
V1
V2

Or V3

[sirenzo]

v3 looks better because the blue green buble c4ds u used fits with it but need to work on your depth and blending a bit more and light source not a bad star feel un finished work on thoes few things i suggested and re post here the resultz or wait for better ad vice from other cnc first then make u changes then . to fix this id us a smudge brush over another applied image and smudge in areas of the focal to give it flow . kiu m8

[crayzcreationz]

Thanx Ight ill work on it a lil more

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[crayzcreationz]

ight ill work on that now

[crayzcreationz]

NEW VERSIONS
CNC Please

V1
V2

V1 has More Blur Just To Let yall know.

[Misery]

Flow is good, the use of the scan lines or whatever are they are good.

Good motion blur streaming down render, BG is good.

But overall it seems to be a little bit too plain/not much going on for my liking.

That's just my opinion.

Nice work.

8/10.