3 new sigs, Smoke it, Formation Cloud, Exiled warrior.

[sherry+]

Well as all of you know, I don't do this everyday...
Though thought to show ya all , I rarely do though here .
I named the first, Smoke-alicious, 2nd Formation Cloud, 3rd Exiled warrior.
all random haha.

[Nitsuj]

Really dig the 1st minus the text.
The second seems a lil oversmudged. Maybe bring the focal more right. And again work on text.
The third would be a lot better if there wasnt C4D all over the focal, but I like the text in it.

[sherry+]

Yeah thanks, I don't got a lot of fonts.
lol I suck at fonts part, hard ! XD
Could you recommend me some fonts? I will work on the stuff you mentioned.
Ah I will reduce also the red noise I created.

[Nitsuj]

Well dafont.com has a ton of good fonts.
Arial is always a favorite of mine

I like the font in the 2nd i feel like the placements off. Maybe try moving the text next to the focal and rotate it slightly

[oNo]

I agree, the first is my favorite, but the depth is just all wrong, seems like the the c4dhas a clearer focal then the render. Minus the text its a great piece.
Second one there is too much empty space, no depth, and you need to work on your text.

[-MM.Kritez]

first and the last have GREAT effects. all three need text work. the middle one has to much negative space.

over all, much improvement, nice work