IronMan Sig CnC Please!

[Kinetics]

Okay here is a sig that i made for SOTW on another site, and i know you guys are teh best, so what would you do, and how would you do it to this tag?

[van Zeben]

the c4d doesnt blend with the render. the render has very odd colouring. you should have applied a gradient mask to it and there isnt a light source to this.. the background doesnt fit with the "theme" of this either. Text is okay however its too bright and it distracts from the focal too much. not bad overall but definitely could be improved

[Highfly]

the c4d doesnt blend with the render. the render has very odd colouring. you should have applied a gradient mask to it and there isnt a light source to this.. the background doesnt fit with the "theme" of this either. Text is okay however its too bright and it distracts from the focal too much. not bad overall but definitely could be improved

^ dis

+ I don't like the render placement either.Try to bring in a light source and play around with the adjustments.It's not bad though,keep it up!

[Kinetics]

the c4d doesnt blend with the render. the render has very odd colouring. you should have applied a gradient mask to it and there isnt a light source to this.. the background doesnt fit with the "theme" of this either. Text is okay however its too bright and it distracts from the focal too much. not bad overall but definitely could be improved

Thanks! Im working on the lights right now, and text