Latest Work

[JaySanity]

Hey, decided to show off some of my latest work, so tell what you all think, I'm really tryna to improve.

This one is in a SotW atm:



^I followed some steps to a tut for that one however. I know it's too sharp, and despite how it looks, I didn't use a light source cause it was already too bright and random. >_<

I experimented with this one after viewing this forum for a while, didn't follow a tutorial however, got really inspired to try to make something sexy.



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Another experiment I've made an hour or so ago:


B&W Version 2:



I have NO idea how to use bokeh, & I still suck a bit at using c4ds quite a lot (I think), that's where the CnC's come in.

Thank you for your time. :]

[RemixIsWin]

On te spiderman one the on the bottom underneath his arm the blue looks like it's flat and the image is cut off, and that sticks out and ruins the blending a little.
The blue bubbles on the top right arnt blending very well with the focal or in the backround. They have potential but You arnt using them right. I would try lowering the opacity and playing around with what effect to put it on. Try Linear Dogdge

I really like the second one and think you did a great job on depth and everything and I like the lighting. I dont like B&W because you can't see all the great colors you've added and blending.

[sirenzo]

spidey is my fav on these the first feels really small for your focal less u trying make it like a sprite tag? kiu got some nice effects going on

[JaySanity]

@ RemixIsWin: I think what you're talking about is the clip mask I put there, maybe I could have found a better place to put there, or blurred it a bit. And the bubbles were too bright on linear dodge, they're on screen if I remember currently. I should have lowered them, might go back and edit the psd. And thanks!

@ sirenzo: Yeah the theme was sprites. And thank you. :]