Halo Smudge | Agitator

[cC.Agitator]

[Liquid]

Hmm not sure if its me but the colors seem to clash a little bit and looks a little overcontrasted, the flows good, depth is ok, lighting needs work,blendings pretty good, kiu

[tzp]

Would be nice to see some more depth, lighting effects and darkened exterior. The smudge is really nice but feels really abrupt in areas almost like he's just placed on top. I love the colors and the outer areas a lot.

[Ebrithil]

you need to add something other than the render to the foreground here.

Don't like the text either.
And did you use a red/pink gradient map? it looks funny.