Experiment #2

[JaySanity]

Still changing up my styles a bit, still trying to make that perfect sig I got in my head. BUT IT NEVER COMES OUT.

Anyway, here's another experiment I made. I'm thinking I probably should have used a city stock or something behind it, I dunno. I added some motion blur to give it a little movement, I'm not sure how much you can see it since I turned it down a bit though.




I think the left side may be a little empty? I was more focused on trying to create a flow. :s

Any cnc is very appreciated.

[sirenzo]

i get that same problem bro looking cool tho kiu nice colors i think maybe your focal is too small try enlarging it a bit might make flow look better but looks cool nice lighting could use some more depth .

[JaySanity]

Thanks sirenzo, I appreciate it. However, even though it doesn't really look like it I did try to add a bit of depth, but because of the background I used it lost a lot of the small detail it has now. I probably should I used a city stock or something :\.

Oh well, I'll see what I can come up with next time. Thanks again!

[sirenzo]

nps looks good tho kiu

[Timentia]

its cool, but its missing something idk what it is
its still cool though kiu

[Downfall]

As Tim said its missing something i cant put my head around what its missing tho but its on the verge of being an amazing sig GJ