Untitled Suicide

[Hutzon]

Please just view it on black

Recreating one of the only dreams I remember.

[Hutzon]

nothing guys?

[shiv96]

I like the dark grungy feel to it. However I think it would be better if the lighting was coming from above him, and casting a shadow down to the stairs. Also, you should darken the right side more to bring more attention to the focal.

[SSSSK]

i think that half of the picture should have a birds eye view of him stepping of the stairs on one side of the pic to give it an extra edge

[cC.Lee]

yes everything looks good on black bg nice one mate i like it.looks like he doesnt have eyes? whos the dude anyway?goodjob!

[Hutzon]

No he does not have eyes, as I did not in my dream. I think that my eyes weren't there because they were removed from my body so I could view it in third person.
The right side shouldn't need to be darkened, your eye automatically goes right to the focal as it's the brightest point in the picture.
There is a shadow being cast on the stairs behind him, you can see it under the light, but I use a soft box so it doesn't have that ugly hard shadow.
I didn't shot it from above because I didn't view it like that in the dream, I viewed it like this. I left the stairs above in to show that it is multiple floors to leave that up to the viewers imagination of height.

[Benni Black]

it would have been more dramatic effect to it if you would have had a soft flash up the steps pointed on him and one to his back left what would have really added to it other then that nice work