DeadSpace sign

[Snayke]

mmm i don't really like this one
what about lightings?
but cnc pls
V2
I have remade from zero

[Derosion]

Lacks blending and FX, seems awfully flat and the render seems too separated from the background, needs more flowing FX and blending and that text could go.
Seems quite good otherwise, I actually do enjoy the bubble C4D's. It just seems incomplete atm, imo.
Kiu!

[Snayke]

update v2
I have remade from zero

[Gaaf]

V2 is a lot better but it still lacks some blending.
now it looks like u pased the render on the bg with some effects, and u dont want that couse i know u have done more to it
try to blend the effects with the bg and the render
love the text btw
gj

[Fayfie]

I like the first one the most.

However, take out the drop shadow from the text. Even though it makes the tag stand out, it makes it look kind of tacky.
I also think that the tag would look much better without text, because with the text, it ruins the mood and atmosphere the tag is trying to give off.