Jim Raynor

[Eighty-Eight]

Jim Raynor from StarCraft 2: Wings Of Liberty

C&C please. I asked a few people already and they think the blue C4D effect under his chin is a bit much. Personally, I like it, but I'd like to get more opinions. I may change some, but I'm not backing down on the brightness of the blue (the intensity of the white line is a different story though).

[Hoshiko]

I think the c4d on the bottom is fine, but you have to blend it in more. I'd take a soft brush on 15-25% opacity and erase around the edge of it, especially around his chin area. The blue c4d to the left of his head could also use some blending, either by erasing or a low strength smudge...

The light source seems a tad intense too.

But other than that I think it looks really cool, I like what you've done with it.
Keep it up!

[Eighty-Eight]

The light source definitely is too intense, I tried fixing that already. Here's my second version:

I didn't like that you couldn't see his hair. One of my friends thought he was bald lool.
I'll give blending the c4d effect a try later today.

[Emsee]

IDea is nice. Style is well executed but maybe needs more improvement to nail it more.

[Eighty-Eight]

Thanks! This is really my first time trying to use as many C4Ds. Usually I only use 1 or 2 if any.