Bellatrix

[+Josh Fx]

Yes after my short break I decided to make a signature. TBH I think it is one of my better ones.

Would love to hear some feedback

[sirenzo]

it could use a light source above the right side but left of her head it seems
not sure whats going on with just one round clipping mask ? on the left side of your tag seem lonely try adding some more and possibly a bit more depth wouldn't hurt . but i like the concept kiu m8

[+Josh Fx]

thanks for that. Yeah it looks kinda awkward haha. Will see how some more look or might just scrap it. And yeah I probably will add a bit of lighting on the right

[Gallagher]

I'm not sure about the clipping masks, just seem rather random.
Also, as mentioned, you may want to work on lighting, not just adding a light source, but also adding some to the render itself, such as green under her chin.
I do like the compo and the green effects are nice, the background matches and has some depth which is great.
It's a good tag mate, just a few small things here and there.

[+Josh Fx]

thanks a lot Gallagher.
You reckon green under her chin? Don't think I can execute that so well. Will probably end up looking terrible haha. Gotta work on my clippage I know :P

I'll see what I can do to fix it up

Btw watching you on DeviantART now (:

[Gallagher]

thanks a lot Gallagher.
You reckon green under her chin? Don't think I can execute that so well. Will probably end up looking terrible haha. Gotta work on my clippage I know :P

I'll see what I can do to fix it up

Btw watching you on DeviantART now (:

My pleasure, mind you the green lighting doesn't have to be under her chin perse, just an idea / example.

Thanks so much, haven't been on dA today yet, but thanks again and for the heads up, I appreciate it.

[+Josh Fx]

haha ok I'll see what I can do.
and no problem :P

[AnthonyE]

I can dig it. I don't know about the round clipping mask though. Maybe add more? I love the whole green feel to it though and I absolutely love the lines. Nice flow.

[Avatar]

I see what you were going for with the orbs..but I think you need to add a little detail to them for it to work...(sawa tut once about incorperating them into a c4d..if I can find it I will pm you the link)

As sir said the right side is a little empty...but great job and def kiu

[+Josh Fx]

Thanks Anthony! I'll see what I can do.

Thanks avatar. would love to see the tut. I honestly don't think I can do much to the right with out it looking strange so I might leave it like that.

Thanks heaps for the comments guys. Anymore would be appreciated