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    Default Ben 10


    Wasn't digging the colors, so I just made it BNW o-o. CNC plis?
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    Last edited by cC.ZaMa; 03-04-2011 at 10:47 PM.

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    Lighting could use some work but good concept, also some of the effects can be cleaned up and made to flow better with the render. Background gives good depth but imo the transition is too harsh.

    Good composition.

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    Opps lol I forgot to work on the lighting xD. Knew something was missing. Will make a v2 soon.

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    A lot of the splatters make it feel messy.

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    Erm v2:

    Not much changes could've been done as I didn't want to reblur the background. But I changed around the lighting and I edited the BNW layer.

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    This just makes me notice the creepy double image of his face in the top right, Imo you should go through this sig layer by layer and clean up the effects. Get a design flow going that you think is good and roll with it. Have to go with a direction

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    Ahh lol I forgot to get rid of it. I clipping masked the background for effects on a splatter so that's probably why the effects look a bit messy and weird.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Razer GFX View Post
    Ahh lol I forgot to get rid of it. I clipping masked the background for effects on a splatter so that's probably why the effects look a bit messy and weird.
    When you're "done" with a signature go through and delete all the layers that aren't showing ( that you made invisible or whatever ). And then reveal the layers one by one starting from the bottom and you'll spot stuff like that easily.

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    Helix gave a great suggestion
    Good Work on the tag
    I like It
    KIU m8

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