Ishamz and Tay collab.

[Ishamz]

Tay starts:

I finish:

Its bright -.-

Less bright:

cnc or something lolz.

[cC.ZaMa]

It was already pretty good without your edit, but then you made it even better! Nice job man. I love the depth, lighting, and the text is alright. The colors are good, and the green part near the render fits. Don't really know what to improve on for this one.

[Manga]

I don't like the ripple like effect on the part without yours, the part on the hand. Without that his part is really good in terms of the background fitting the render.

On your part the area with the cuts along the renders body I don't like and the swirling part along the hand.

kiu

[oNo]

v1 ftw.
Glad to not see any smudge .__.
Great flow, dont like the effect on the hand needs better lighting
Really like the simplicity, Kiu shamz

[Ishamz]

v1 ftw.
Glad to not see any smudge .__.
Great flow, dont like the effect on the hand needs better lighting
Really like the simplicity, Kiu shamz

='( Lol.
thanks for the comments guys

[Slave]

I love the brighter v, i also like the ripple effect, i just think it should have been cleaned up a tad, some places the ripple effect is hard.

I also feel you lost some of the colour in her face when you added a light source, I would suggest putting a photo filter on it and erasing everywhere but her skin area.

other than that, good job boys ^^ you made a pretty together ^^

p.s gimme render :P

[oNo]

oh shamz.
I love your smudge, its just something new is always better xD

[Ishamz]

Haha its okay xD
Heres the render:

[cc.RadillacVIII]

To be honest I like it much more before you made any adjustents to it. It's way to white bright washed out with tired colors. Try to keep the original colors as in Tay's version and maybe implant some more cyan to it.

The adjustment layers is the most critical point of sig making, it can either make wounders or drag it into the dirt. So go easy on them, don't stress, redo and try different options until you get a nice outcome.

[Downfall]

Smexy ishy , and yeah everyone i chose this render a) because its one of newbies, and b) to get ish to not smudge for ounce :P