Optimus Prime Sig, New Style

[Kinetics]

Okay, so i tried a new style, and i like the outcome, it could've been better but whatever, Ratings and C&C please

[Manga]

Not bad.

There isn't any flow though which is a bad part.
Try using a motion blur in the direction of the source of light to fix that.
The text seems like you erased part of it or set it low a low opacity which is strange.
This seems to be on of your better ones. Does seem a bit empty but I'm sure that could be fixed quite easily. Keep it up!

[Kinetics]

Yay! thank you mangs, i will try the motion blur thing soon

[NomNom]

yea its good and preety but it missing the flow and its kinda empty, text is cool its kinda ok, try adding a c4d that matches the flow and a few apophysis fractals and you got it.

[Liquid]

It needs Flow, Depth and its kinda empty, try incorporating some c4d's for more depth

[edwinpabito]

needs flow a little contrast
and also the text is not that good