The height measurements increments are wrong, also they should fade out, as if they were on the wall that is being lit, ie just match the lighting. I also wish that the bottem half of the guys body were light better, a bounce card could even fix it. It just need's some fill, because you are loosing all detail. The text is too grungy, it's becoming hard to read in some places. Also the 100% text block on the right guys should move over so it doesn't touch the edge of the image, it's creating a tension point.
What point are you trying to make though? I don't really understand what the concept behind it is, yes I get the point about the guts but is that it?
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