Crysis Sig

[Kinetics]

Here is a new crysis sig i made for a Twisted Puppets Tag wall, tell me what you think!

V2

For some reason, the lightning is messed up, thats not what it looks like on my comp. Ill play with the settings later

[Muffin]

Liked some textures you used. REMOVE THOSE FUCKING LINES. Just erase A BIT of the lightning. The rest is kinda cool bro, gj

[Kinetics]

Remove what lines?

[Ishamz]

Those white things over the render.

[Kinetics]

Oh the lightning, Yeah, i wanted it to be like gaafjeahs half life sig, but it didnt work

[Derosion]

Lighting and text are both very poor.

Your text is auto-distracting and the soft brush lighting is ruining the actually definition of lighting and the appeal of the signature.

Your focal is too big.
You lack effects, therefore nothing pops out which brings down your depth.

The lightning looks horrid, remove it asap.

Kiu.

[Kinetics]

Lighting and text are both very poor.

Your text is auto-distracting and the soft brush lighting is ruining the actually definition of lighting and the appeal of the signature.

Your focal is too big.
You lack effects, therefore nothing pops out which brings down your depth.

The lightning looks horrid, remove it asap.

Kiu.

THANK YOU! I was wondering why my lightning looked bad, it was on a soft brush! But without the lightning, it is too empty, well, i guess i will work on that now

[edwinpabito]

if you want to have some lightnings find some image on google and set it to lighten or linear dodge