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    Default Grace Unkept

    ANOTHER one of my poems xD Again written like 2 years ago back when I used to participate in a comp.

    At that time of my life, lets just say my love life was in a bit of shambles, though Apa may know some of the history... :S

    Grace Unkept -

    Forever in my thoughts,
    There you lay,
    Surrounded by memories
    Of yesterday

    When I had you then,
    I ignored you,
    I sent you away

    I was so ignorant
    You tried to get through
    But I became too proud
    I ended hurting you

    Patience is a virtue
    Its to be learnt well
    Days slowly passing by
    Made me realise I was a bit too swell

    Ignorance is an atrocity
    Its sin is pride
    I will admit my wrong
    I will no longer hide

    While I regret these days
    I'm in your debt
    Time by myself made me realise
    My Grace Was Unkept

    ******************

    Quote Originally Posted by Slave
    takken, you sweet boy you, i could eat you 6^

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    very well written takken, nice flow to it. Thanks for sharing. did you win the comp with this one?

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    Thanks DOM. This is definitely one of my fav poems I have written. And no I didn't win that one. Dude there was this man called earwasere and I must say he was very good at constructing poems. He won like nearly every comp there was (there was about 20 lyrical beasts before it finished) But then he had to go away on some atheletic leave or something of the sort. Either way, he left us with some very good stuff, sucks he had to leave.

    Quote Originally Posted by Slave
    takken, you sweet boy you, i could eat you 6^

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