Max Payne..with max clipping

[Strid3r 9Y0]

I chose Maxy(Aaaaaah Max...deaRest of all my fRiends..),cuz he's beginner/intermediate friendly.This time I really worked on the text,focal point and tried some new effect wit that black snow around them..phew...

[Strid3r 9Y0]

No criticism?That means I did good..

[chaosrxn]

eh, it has a lot of dead space, and the eyes are drawn to too many focus points. and a 1px black border >_<