GFXVoid Graphic Design Forum

Remove Text Formatting
Loading...

» Online Users: 141

0 members and 141 guests
No Members online

» Site Navigation

 > FAQ

» Stats

Members: 35,445
Threads: 103,056
Posts: 826,628
Top Poster: cc.RadillacVIII (7,427)
Welcome to our newest member, Lekelindids
Results 1 to 5 of 5
  1. #1
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Location
    South Africa
    Posts
    400

    Default How can I improve on this?

    Suggestions are highly appreciated





















  2. #2

    Default

    the hand didnt blend much on the bg




    ^thanks for the epic gift AGITATOR!

    SOTW:261|265|288|308 |edwinpabito.deviantart.com













  3. #3
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Location
    Michigan
    Posts
    269

    Default

    Take the scan lines off the render
    Looks a little too sharp
    Tone down the fx on the left some, play with the Fill?
    Move the text to the left of the render, and whats the japanese figure mean? If you dont know, i would take it out.. Could mean ass-hat for all I know lmao
    Also It looks like the renders distorted?

  4. #4
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    The Netherlands
    Posts
    2,776

    Default

    Be carefull with scanlines. I use them as small effects. Keep you focal clean! Scanlines are horizontal - flow is diagonal, so they don't "work" together. Render needs to be blended in. (read tut's on that - there are million ways to do that ) Colors are a bit over the place, try work with gradients on "soft light - 30/50%"
    text is not in the best of places. Use some effects.

  5. #5
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    894

    Default

    it's weird o.O
    Not really feeling the flow.
    Gift From Rad: Click Me
    Gift From Domino: Click Me

Similar Threads

  1. How can i improve this?
    By Valkyr in forum Sigs & Manips
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 06-22-2009, 02:31 PM
  2. How can I improve this?
    By mrlunget in forum Digital Art
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 12-02-2005, 11:04 PM
  3. Did I improve?
    By Goggplex in forum Digital Art
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 11-30-2005, 12:11 AM
  4. How can I Improve?
    By Tenchido in forum Sigs & Manips
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 07-24-2005, 05:43 PM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Powered by vBadvanced CMPS v4.1.1