New Introduction

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This is my newest Cinema 4d intro, and it's my 3rd ever attempted. The next one I make I will probably incorporate with another program, such as AAE or vegas pro. Let me know what you guys think about it ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LMJN4-wxOmo&hd=1

Thanks.

(Ignore the music that's on there, just thought it was a little too boring without sound)

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Bump for feedback

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Maybe a bit too much fast movement? Need to be able to read all of it.

I would do a fade to black at the end so you don't have the gray ground as the final frame.