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    Just made this a few hours ago, what ya think? <_<

    Crit please.

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    IMO because it is a cartoon character maybe you could have put in a cartoon colored background instead of an abstract bg....anyways the text is too dark and there something covering supermans head...your multicolouring needs a little work thou...but still nice job
    DONT talk if you have NOTHING good to say.

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    Thanks for the advice, will work on that in the morning.

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    Render seems over blended.

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    like it was said the colours are to dark for a cartoon render, maybe change them around and multi-colour.

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    Thanks for the crit guys, advice taken, will post the improved version in a few minutes.

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    Made all changes, except cartoon bg as i would have had to make sig again, but advice taken though and will do next time i make a sig with a cartoon stock


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    looks a littlw better&#33; gj

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    I like the update you made. The render blending is done pretty well, I don&#39;t think it&#39;s over blended at all. I like the little motion blur you have over Superman, it&#39;s really well placed eye-candy. The only other things I would improve would be maybe not using as many colours in the background (i mean it looks fine, but there&#39;s just a little too much) and maybe work on the text, like the position. It&#39;s kinda just floating randomly there.

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    Thanks guys, text is a weakness i think its about i read a tut on text skills, xD.

    Maybe i should start using downloaded brushes as well. <_<

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