Jin Kazama {tag}

[Strid3r 9Y0]

Activated "berserk" mode,started my PS,added them renders,BG and c4d,mix the FFfffuck out of 'em,add some of my smudge and clipping masks..here's what I got:




B&W

[Liquid]

looks nice, i like the flow and text is awesome
work on lighting and try not to make his head soo blurry , it ruins the detph

[Strid3r 9Y0]

work on lighting

There's not gonna be more lightning.

[edwinpabito]

the fist looks lq...and try adding some more effect

[cs4pro]

There's not gonna be more lightning.

"Work on the lightning" doesn't always mean "Create more lightning".
In this case I would say, lessen you lightning. You have 2 real lightningsources atm.
One at the right and one at the lieft of his head. The sig needs some dark spaces so keep one of them, and create shadow at the other side.
I like the colored version more.
But I would bring the colors out more. The text is pretty nice, and the effects are working well.
Overall nice tag Keep it up

[Strid3r 9Y0]

"Work on the lightning" doesn't always mean "Create more lightning".
In this case I would say, lessen you lightning. You have 2 real lightningsources atm.
One at the right and one at the lieft of his head. The sig needs some dark spaces so keep one of them, and create shadow at the other side.
I like the colored version more.
But I would bring the colors out more. The text is pretty nice, and the effects are working well.
Overall nice tag Keep it up

10x for the full advice

and try adding some more effect

More is not always better.