Stary knight

[Manga]

[Fork]

I like the compo and flow Lighting needs a bit of work everything is a bit to dark. Also the head are looks a bit choppy. Could use some more effects around the focal point

[Manga]

I'll work on the effects but I was trying to make everything dark like that :S.

Idk if I can recut the render very well but I'll try.

[Fork]

If you dodge the bright spots in the back a little it'll help with the depth, and try just taking like a 45 px eraser brush and lower the opacity of the brush and erase around th choppy parts.

[Manga]

okay and just made:

[Mare]

V1 i think is better because those dark spots are lowered in opacity.
the render is better in v2 though.
kiu!

[Fork]

v2 would be better if you reworked the back spots.

[Manga]

[edwinpabito]

i like this better...your latest version

even tho its too dark..but i like it..it gives emphasis to the colors

[Mare]

Alot Better!