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[Justinijan]

hmm i tried to make something for one forum but seems like i failed pls have a look at this and tell me some advice/s // tip/s, should i add something should i remove smtg well there isnt much to remove xd .
and yeah im begginer

[+Josh Fx]

haha bro no such thing as failing in tag making :P

Anyway onto the CnC
The smudge is rather plain. Try make it more layered and detailed. Will produce a much more appealing look.
Here on the void we like to call what you have done 'floating head syndrome.' Basically just having a floating head isn't very appealing. Also makes it hard for vital things like flow, blending and depth.
The border should just be dropped. I personally don't use borders but if you really want to keep it small and smart. So a 1-2px black borer is ideal.
The text is too big and distracting. Try to get a nice clean font that suits the signature.
The colours could also use some work. Use some nice gradient maps and other adjustment layers. They really do help to get some nice colours going.

Lastly that random black space should go. Add some more smudge over there.