HellJumper

[Kinetics]

Well this is a sig of an ODST xD i stole the color scheme from an ODST sig that i recently saw. . .CnC please

[Fayfie]

Lovely concept. However, the sparkling effect doesn't seem to flow well with the direction the gun is pointing to.

Overall, the lighting is fantastic and I really like the setting.

[Derosion]

It needs more darkening to help the lighting. The fractals seem dull and they just seem to be sitting there.
All in all, you need to bring out the colors and lighting.
The canvas also seems cluttered with too many C4D's, so composition work is needed.

Kiu!

[Kinetics]

Lovely concept. However, the sparkling effect doesn't seem to flow well with the direction the gun is pointing to.

Overall, the lighting is fantastic and I really like the setting.

Thanks man will work on it some more

It needs more darkening to help the lighting. The fractals seem dull and they just seem to be sitting there.
All in all, you need to bring out the colors and lighting.
The canvas also seems cluttered with too many C4D's, so composition work is needed.

Kiu!

What parts would you suggest i darken? And how should i make the fracs not dull?

[Misery]

There's no flow, but I like the monochromatic effect you got there.

[Kinetics]

There pretty much is no flow, but imo it still works

[Ill_Method]

I think it's really cool actually. Love the effects.

[Kinetics]

Thanks, glad you like it