I like this one out of the two better, I would like to see a little more down with lighting in this piece though I like the vexel's you used goes well with the render the black also compliments the piece rather nice if you ask me. The text is a bit lame and uneeded, overall this piece is solid and I don't have many complaints about it.
Again the text is an eye sore in this one, I like what you tried to do with the c4d's but the colors don't really work try adding a few gradient maps and maybe some fractals/clip masking around her torso, also I'm not liking the glamor shine on the c4d's. The black bg doesn't suit this one as much I'd like to see a bit more BG and lighting work. The render and c4d's need a bit more blending the glamor shine you have going on ruins any blending you might of had going on.
Not liking the c4d effects you used here, their a bit chaotic and have no real flow nor do they blend in with anything very well. This is my least favorite of them all. I would recommend lightening up the end of his gun with a purplish soft brush set on linear dodge and add a light source at the proper area's. Try some gradient maps and rework the c4d's try the use of some fractals and clip masking like I mentioned before. Also try working on your depth a bit more.
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