team leader challange throw aways

[sirenzo]

MY Entry


First Throw Away



Second Throw Away



Third Throw Away

[Derosion]

You should have picked the first throw away.
What I think you should work on is your colors and effects.

Most of them seem monochromatic. I like your concepts but you lack execution.
The filter effects you are using seem a bit amateur to me, imo. Try to work with something more solid, look at other artwork and mix it with your own ideas to get something.

Also you spelt, "destruction" wrong .
Kiu!

[Synsational]

Voted 3rd Throw away, looked great.

[sirenzo]

You should have picked the first throw away.
What I think you should work on is your colors and effects.

Most of them seem monochromatic. I like your concepts but you lack execution.
The filter effects you are using seem a bit amateur to me, imo. Try to work with something more solid, look at other artwork and mix it with your own ideas to get something.

Also you spelt, "destruction" wrong .
Kiu!

wahah oops my bad and tx man just messing with things really trying to experiment a bit . see what i can come up with glad u like the first throw away tho i didn't much. i prefer my 3d more

[sirenzo]

Voted 3rd Throw away, looked great.

tx man i thought so too but some thought the effect on the leg going up wards loses from the rest of the flow .

[Image]

*Destruction

I picked number 3, blending and color was great.

[sirenzo]

i blame the Maine school district sry and tx for pointing out my well known error in my typing . but tx for the cnc all glad u thought so man yeah i thought i did pretty decent on the 3 as well .

[-MM.Kritez]

all of your throwaways look better than the one u picked

[schultz]

sirenzo gmv.

loool jk

nice tags man
<3 the 3rd one, i think you woulda got a lot of votes if you entered that one.
gotta work on your colors a lil tho cuz its a lil monotonish if ya ask me... still good nonetheless

oh and yeah... also work on those shapes :P

[sirenzo]

tx guys glad u think so i really tried hahaha to find a newer style for my self and yes i need work on my shapes any clues on it wahaha . and i agree on the colors i should have had them stand out more then they did . tx for the cnc all and also tx kritez i thought so too .