Very Abstract

[Kinetics]

I think this is a really cool piece, just made it for fun and it turned out great.
CnC please

[Slave]

I like your connectors thast cool stuff ^^

You know what I think would look good with this but still keep it clean and simple looking ? Give them some shadow, and I see you are atempting drip as well, maybe put a little more in on the rest of the open space, atm my eye is pulled over there becuase of the unique attention it got. Like just a little more drip in the center action. You already have good show of depth becuase of the way you are using the connectors to show depth, just g o a step farther with shadow.

Putting some shadow onto these orbs from the cconnectors imo would boost the tag in style and attitude

Kepp at it, I totally love it !!

[Kinetics]

How would you suggest i add shadow?

[Derosion]

Good thing you're trying new stuff.
It's a very good start, that's what I can say but it seems like a wip atm.

I would suggest you start adding in more inside shapes onto the current shapes you have now to add more detail.
Even your background. Try adding a design (not circular) to it so it isn't completely boring.

The connectors are pretty cool and I think you should try adding some drips.
Detail, my friend. That's all it needs.
Kiu!

[sirenzo]

yeah in deed this is nice bro , i like the color key u got going on to show colors used in this . i agree with slave above a nice cast shadow would look nice on this tag , your doing a great job bro and i like your trying so many new things kiu m8 will have to make a gift for u for most improvement.

[Kinetics]

Thanks guys, will ad more details later, got to do some stuff now, but will update with a V2 later

[sirenzo]

awesome bro can't wait to see the updates you made on it kiu the good work .

[Kinetics]

V2 Added

[wrftw]

Shading compo and detail needs a lot of work. Also get rid of that fucking borders.

[Kinetics]

Shading compo and detail needs a lot of work. Also get rid of that fucking borders.

lol, y u no like my border? But okay, thanks