Mystic

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Not too fond of this one, but thought I'd post it up for some CnC.

[Fork]

I like where you were trying to go with this, Although it looks really flat try sharpening the render and some of the effects a bit to make them pop. I like what you did with the ball in his hand but the purple color kind of throws it off a bit, the piece in general feels really washed out and dull, try adding some contrast and vibrance to it to make everything pop. I think this piece would look nice with some fractal whoring and maybe a few pentool touches here and there. Try making your backgrounds a little more interesting and work on your depth.

[Ishamz]

render needs to be sharpened
dont place ur rende rin the middle, follow the rule of thirds
compo needs work, ^
it lacks blending and the tag is too bright

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To whoever thinks the render needs to be sharpened, in the direct link to it on PB, the render is sharpened. I don't know if the Void's uploader like stretched it out or something (it does look bigger than it's supposed to), but I had it way more sharp than it looks on this page.

Fork, I agree about the purple, I'll try to edit that.

I'll make a V2 based on your guys' cnc soon.