Cnc 2 times :p

[Allseeyineye]

made 2 new ones





Plz cnc

[exclusive]

try to work on your color
like the second one is just a rainbow so that doesn't work

[Derosion]

I am sorry I couldn't get to your PSD but I've recognized a few problems you are having.

One thing is you maintain proper flow with C4D's but you use too many. Especially in the second tag here, you have too C4D's.

What I also suggest you stop using is brushes and adding blending FX to them. Blending FX aren't really used for tagging, unless it's going to be of some pentool work, but otherwise if you're going for solid C4D work, avoid blending FX.

A third thing is your contrast and quality. Your render choices are very LQ and your work has a lot more potential. Try to pick better quality renders that before hand aren't overcontrasted, brightened and choppy. The section here has lots of great renders and I've probably downloaded 40 - 50 of them myself.

Composition and quality. Keep working at it !