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    I think you should work on the lighting on the sign and blending the render with the sign :S

    i liked the colors




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    It's cool that you're trying new stuff but from here on you should work on your colors, lighting and blending.

    I would now try throwing in adjustments, especially on the render because it doesn't really blend in ;o.
    Another thing I would try doing is adding more colors and lighter tones. Your basic tone here is of a heavy blue, you should try putting in some cyan, green or possibly magenta.

    Your lighting here would be a lot better if you executed it better from where it is angled, the middle/top.
    You need to add some FX there and adjust it so it fits in with the flow you have.
    Great base you have here but it just needs to be finished off now. Keep at it!
    Last edited by Derosion; 06-22-2011 at 07:02 AM.






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    nice to see u experiment and try new things, but this needs work
    the blending needs work, i dont thnk its the best render choice either. pretty gay perspective to blend and to use. brush around the render and chnage the blend mode to sft light, dont overdo it. lightning also needs work, theres no light source and those 2 blue spots r random , lightning should be coming from the top of the canvas. the right side of the tag is pretty empty, boring. try to add maybe some effects or more c4ds there, but dont make em so dark. the tag needs a wow factor, there r no effects or anything that catches our attention, should work on that too. as for the bg, i know u tried to make it look like it has a great depth, but it kinda failed tbh. the blue bg with the stars u have is overcontrasted/sharpened. looks low quality.
    u can also try adding more color to the tag, it looks monotone atm.
    last thing id do is remove the borders.
    keep it up
    enzo <3


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