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[cC.Agitator]

Yes I know topaz blah blah, its my first time alright

[LilBasedGod]

Pretty good sig i like the flow and colors, but i don't really like the text placement overall it's a good sig 9.5/10 =D

[Fork]

Yes I know topaz blah blah, its my first time alright

Well as you said, the piece is a tad over Topaz'd don't get me wrong Topaz can be a great tool if used correctly and at the right time. It doesn't look that bad on this piece but I would recommend cutting back on it a bit in the future. First thing I notice is the text, to be blunt it's awful I would recommend placing it better and perhaps decreasing the size I realize you were trying to make it flow with everything else but it kind of just kills the piece I would shrink it a bit and maybe place i over his arm on the right since the right side is a bit empty. Now I like the effects you used but I would like to see more on the right side. You also need to work on the depth try blurring out some of the smaller spots on the right to add some depth and add maybe a few more effects behind him with a bit of blurring. His right arm is a bit off colored I would recolor it to match the blue lighting you have going on, right now it is a yellowish tint same thing goes for his left arm should be a blue tint not a yellow one, his hand on the right is too dark it's too close to the blue light orb to be that dark it should be illuminated a bit with a blueish color from the orb. I would also like to see some of the effects you used on the left side maybe on his lower right leg make it so it kind of wraps around to the left side behind him to create a nice sense of depth and to make the right less empty. Also not a fan of the cinematic style border. And that is about it, feel free to post here or PM me if you have any further questions or want help with anything else.

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[Kinetics]

I think the topaz works no this piece because it makes the tag look kind of cartoony, but overall good job and remove the text

[cC.Agitator]

I am bad a text I know and thanks fork and my text is awful <333

[edwinpabito]

i like the topaz effect on the render but not on the bg.
light orbs looks cool tho some of them are misplaced
the left side effects looks a bit messy because its quite too randomized