[CNC]Taboo

[wrftw]

Made for a battle themed board games.









Hard cnc plix.

[edwinpabito]

3 ofc

the emotion of the girl doesnt seem to match the board game thingy lol
the smudge on 1st is better but the atmo on 3rd is the best

[Gaaf]

Seccond one for sure, I love the smudged mounth in that one
I realy like that taboo thing to,
Few things i dont like are:
U smudged the left part of her face, it looks wierd and doesnt seem to blend...
That c4d? splatter bruhs? or w/e under the taboo pic looks woerd and ruins the flow.
Also the smudge at the button left, its kinda outa flow to.
I realy like it but as said there are a few thing that need a change.
hope u like my hard cnc lol, i got a few other things but i leave that for another crew member

[wrftw]

Final is up.

[Ill_Method]

Looks sloppy overall no lighting, no depth, bad choice of render for a smudge ( no color, mostly black) The effect under the Taboo looks really bad also(diminishes your flow). In V2,3 you smudge her eye and it looks really bad. I vote for V1.

[wrftw]

You sure you are able to see the final version? There must be 4 tags there atm. And I don't have texture in right bottom. I have a decent lighting. And I think I also got the depth with the lighting on face. If you still think same can you elaborate?

[Ill_Method]

You sure you are able to see the final version? There must be 4 tags there atm. And I don't have texture in right bottom. I have a decent lighting. And I think I also got the depth with the lighting on face. If you still think same can you elaborate?

The gradient or filter used in the last version is too strong, pretty much wipes out all your work. Seems like a clean up to me. Also there is some weird soft brushing to the left of her head.

[Derosion]

Looks sloppy overall no lighting, no depth, bad choice of render for a smudge ( no color, mostly black) The effect under the Taboo looks really bad also(diminishes your flow). In V2,3 you smudge her eye and it looks really bad. I vote for V1.

I understand you are entitled to your own opinion but you should take time to notice some of the things done to this piece. There is indeed lighting.

OT;
I prefer the last version because the lighting looks better although it is a tad dark so you miss some of the great details you've added. Also the "taboo" thing you've added is very cool and creative but has a bit too much contrast.

Looks good, just a few small fixes and it'll be basically flawless. Kiu!

[Ill_Method]

I understand you are entitled to your own opinion but you should take time to notice some of the things done to this piece. There is indeed lighting.

I was talking about V1, there is little to no lighting (exaggerated a bit) the other versions it gets darker and darker to the point of where you can't see anything in the tag. V2 has best lighting, but lacks in other areas.

[wrftw]

Okthnx can you gtfo of this thread now? What's the fucking point of critiquing v1 while there are v2 v3.