new signature

[Imagine]

just a new piece of this cool render <3

srsly cooment

[Shann]

Well the tag is good but some tweeks can make it more batter. First some things which should be kept in the mind that never center a focal or render. It doesn't look good. Now the two things which can make this tag a lot better is blending and c4d placement. First lets take c4d placement. See don't spam the c4ds all over the tag. First place your render than see whether c4d is going with your render if yes than good if no than erase some parts of c4ds resize it so that it goes with render. Now comes blending part. Well you see adding a c4d on render dosen't blend a render for blending the render do some gmaps on low opacity do some filters but keep in mind that filters make tag monotone sometimes sp choose well. Than you can add some effect c4ds some star stock for small sparkle. Do this tweeks and tag will be ready to rock. KIU.
If you want to ask anything than feel free to contact me.

[Wolvy]

Agree with shann, but not on the "it shouldnt be centered" part. I don't understand this "rule of thirds." Sure in some cases ofcourse it's better, but in others, a centered focal can be pulled off really well!

[Ill_Method]

Agree with shann, but not on the "it shouldnt be centered" part. I don't understand this "rule of thirds." Sure in some cases ofcourse it's better, but in others, a centered focal can be pulled off really well!

The centered focal makes it easier to have good composition because you're working with equal amounts of space. However if you do not fill both the left and right sides equally the sig won't look right. Also in doing so your sig could have a mirrored effect, which isn't good. This will just make your sig look boring and monotone.

I think those are the pros/cons of having a centered focal from my understanding. Correct me if I'm wrong though.

Ishamz would be the best person to explain as he quotes that on every CnC

[Lewk]

It needs some colour, the c4ds are too dark and dont seem to be siginificantly improving the artwork, it just looks like its there..
It needs to do something. Colour it or change it. Then itll be better

[Derosion]

Pretty good tag you got there buddy, just a few small errors you've made that are bringing it down .

Okay, for one thing nice use of C4D, you've placed them really well although they stand out a lot and become a major distraction. I'd try to focus on your lighting here. Try to angle it from possibly on the right of him and darken the sides.

I would also suggest you bring out your colors so the tag really has a 'wow' factor to it.
Mainly just blending and bring out those hidden colors !

Kiu!