Pretty interesting concept you've picked up on here exclusive and cool use of clipping masks.
The main issues I see here is the composition and colors.
As I said before, cool use of clipping masks but you focused it in one area and therefore it's really messy there. Also being that area beside your focal, it loses the focal a tad by distraction.
I'd try to move some of the clipping masks to the empty right side and overall just remove some because I believe they're too many and therefore they get easily boring.
The colors are alright as of now but it seems a bit monotone and imo you should add some cyan to this to make it 'pop' more.
Good work, kiu!
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