Deadspace girl

[rebreb23]

[Mind4Freaks]

You need to work on that focal and lighting :S

[-KV.Noname]

very cool . only issuse i have with it is it bright as hell tone it down a bit and it should be fine

[AnthonyE]

Brightness is a bit much, and I think as a result your render's cut came out a bit choppy. Tone down the brightness and it'll fix that problem most likely. I actually like the text here, but I don't like the placement. Keep it up.

[pongikp]

nice work ..,
The Nick Isnt So Good ,
And need To Work About Depth.

[G..]

bottom of her face is really bright, maybe burn it a bit to tone it down