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  1. #1
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    Default Rusty


    First tag I've made in like 2 years
    Last edited by C_K; 06-30-2011 at 07:41 AM.

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    No focal or flow, lighting etc :S

    I didn't like that tag very much, neither the colors or composition...




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    i think if you had the effects u have under the text under your focal would look better and maybe turn them to follow in her hand motion to give you back your flow and id work on the depth and lighting if could if don't remember those things maybe try looking up tuts on it to just give u a quick reminder on how to do it again best of luck m8 .


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    Default CnC

    Quote Originally Posted by C_K View Post
    The concept is a good one, I got what you tried to make but the execution kind of ruined it for you and the quality of the left side.

    The render looks really small compared to everything else in the signature, when measuring the text it is almost as big as her face which is never a good idea. Text should be as big as movie credits are, or similar.

    Your colors are also too solid, they don't match and they don't really make a good clash either. You could use better blending, make the render a bit bigger and then paint the entire thing one color because the solid hard brush around the render looks really bad especially around her breast area.

    However I do like that you didn't go straight to C4D's and actually tried drawing something yourself so that is a pretty good start to getting back on the tag making horse.

    Good luck, wh.

  5. #5
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    lol, alright thanks for the input. =)

    This has renders(C4D's) in it. =) Its just a mix of that and brushing. Thanks for the input. It was more a quick momentary trip down nostalgia line than anything.

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