Fable

[ascheb]

been a long time... I dno what made me use a Fable stock but meh... CnC pwetty pweeze

V2:

[Synsational]

Looks pretty awesome and the depth is pretty nice as well as the effects.

I found the blue C4D on the right side to be a bit distracting when I first looked at the sig, though. Maybe lowering the opacity of it will help a bit but your depth is fine.

There seems to be a really sharp line going around the render too, it kind of lowers the quality of the render itself so maybe lowering the sharpness of it will make that disappear, even though I see the sparkles on it the final outcome looks like its breaking.

Last I would say watch your colors, try a variety of colors so the signature won't look monotone (just one color). I see blue and purple toned blue but I think you might need a bit more, maybe some green+dark gray gradient maps and some shading adjustment layers will help with that.

Good luck, keep it up and hope to see more :]

[ascheb]

Wow you are extremely helpful!!! seriously best CnC I will have to open up this psd tomoz... and work on those suggestions I agree the blue c4d is distracting and doesnt really fit all that well... I see your point also about the pentool line will check it out with it gone

Colors didnt used to be hard for me but I am finding in times of recent I really struggle with making the colors work... I need to brush up on how to use filters to help that... if u know of any good tuts for that lemme know

Thanks again

[Synsational]

No problem my man

[Lewk]

Like syn said.. I dont like the blue c4ds..
Also, the lighting is weird, its drawing your eyes one way, then the other. and it doesnt bring focus to the focal. - This goes hand in hand with flow.. You've got some nice effects but they take they eyes away...

Its a little too sharp in places also.

Its a good start, could do with some work. Good Luck.

[ascheb]

Well it was hard to deal with the sharpen issue since I never used sharpen or even a filter that would sharpen it... and in an attempt to blur to tone that down took away from my focal... BUT I did work with this... and took on the CnC from you guys... Thanks so much for your help... well here is v2...