Creation an LP by Kinetics

[Kinetics]

Well i made this in C4D and photoshop, so tell me what yo think

http://shaionm.deviantart.com/#/d3l4pi7

[Kinetics]

Awww cmon 31 Views 0 replies???

[sirenzo]

im not exactly sure what your concept was for this ? i see the light looks like its in the bg which is rather nice but the rest of it not sure man, what was your own thoughts on this lp ? it's ok i guess. the effects needs some work and more depth in other places .
text looks slapped on no effort in that m8 i know u can do better you've been improving try again and this time work on your focal so it's more visible

what looks like to me is a green lantern and a 51 in the middle ?

[Kinetics]

Idk i was bored and this is what came out, and yeah the text is terrible, but like i said its just what came out of me being bored, supposed to be creation of the universe

[cC.ShorterGFX]

I quite like this. I have no idea what is it, but it has a nice atmosphere to it. I think in order to improve, you should concentrate more on the concept. And I really don't mind the text at the bottom.
Overall, I like it, but as far as the "rules" of art go, there are certain things you need to apply.