Collab with friend

[cC.Riqochaii]

Collab with my friend lordwafflez (beginner at gfx) we did this collab so we can share our different techniques
CnC please

http://riqochaii.deviantart.com/art/...flez-217686767

check out his dA
http://lordwafflez.deviantart.com/

[Synsational]

That looks really good

[cC.Riqochaii]

Thanks btw before someone mentions the blurred right hand I tried to smudge the hand so it can blend with the bg and failed :/

[Synsational]

Yeah I see it but it doesn't matter, some blurred spots in certain areas work and sometimes it doesn't in this case it sort of does.

Overall the tag looks really good.

[Ill_Method]

Lose the border, or make it black. The hot pink or w.e. it is stands out way too much. Nice sig, kiu.

[ascheb]

hand is actually kinda crazy for me... but otherwise this is cool... good group effort!! I like the purple lighting to the right

[cC.Riqochaii]

The replys from an actual gfx forum is much different than a gaming forum look at some of these replies

http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=286446 (not advertising)

[Gaaf]

I dont understand the finish..
Its so difrent than the 4th edit..
I have to say that i like 3rd version the most.
and on the finish u have to remove the pink border.
and its very purple but lightning and depth is good.
one of your best man

[JDdesign]

I have to agree with what most of the people on the game forum said. Whenever you want to give the impression of your character stepping through an opening you need to still maintain the realism. What's happened is you've takin up practically all the bg space with the c4d which lowers the visibility of the original stock bg. Also you've blurred out the hand which makes it look like it's just been erased for no real purpose. Blending is important but not to the point of making your image look unacceptable to the eye.

Always look at your art from not just an artistic view but from a realistic view. If you do something to an image that doesn't look right to the eye it will be hard to focus on much else.

The lighting is also off because in essence you have no light shining on the front of his body so it would be shaded. Also at the top of the sig above his shoulders you have some random light spots that don't belong. And lastly you should never use bright borders for anything other than vector sigs imo. This would look much better without a border.

[cC.Riqochaii]

My friend said he didnt know what else to do and I thought the signature looked empty and boring so I added C4Ds

Btw heres the actual sig